Revised script

1.) Ext Night

Shots of the city at night. Cars moving, neon lights and traffic.

2.) Int Night

Quote stated by protagonist. Dark room lit from behind. Silhouette of the main characters face.

3.) Int Night Inside of club & Ransom pictures shown

Loud music plays. People are dancing, standing, carrying drinks and laughing. Lighting is dark but faces are clear. The focus is on the main character as she moves through the crowed. She carries a drink, greets the people that she recognises and moves closer to view.

Antagonist prepares the photographs of the main character. Lays them out on the table and writes on the back of them. Different angles cut in with club scene.

4.) Ext Night Alleyway

Main character leaves nightclub. Walks out of door and down alleyway. The music fades as door closes and we move further away from club (POV shot). Camera follows her down the alleyway, she slightly stumbles on her shoes and does not pay attention to surroundings.

5.) Attack scene & voiceover

Flickering images in attack scene. Black screen when character is talking. The images cut in to interrupt the voiceover.

6.) Ext Night Ransom photos revealed

Protagonist leans against wall and kneels next to the dead body of the Antagonist. Picks ups photographs individually and looks at them. Main character runs into distance.

by Lauren